The "Revising" of your Paragraph

I gave my paragraph a grade of 92.5%, which I believe is an A- but I'm not sure. My first draft most definitely would have gotten a lower grade, maybe something such as a B or B-. The revisions added a lot to my writing. I had place where I had missing words, or I left out something for the quote, etc. I was missing two quotes entirely! I also needed to cite the quotes correctly.